not bad but honestly I feel like it could of been done better. maybe if it were done in colour,but I think the the exacution just needs to be changed. maybe even simpleifed. It would also have a greater effect if it wasn't just a pony but you, but this just my opion you don't have to listen to what I say.
Yeah, I really do love the black and white because it gives it that eerie effect and makes it more.... I dunno the words... I guess.. epic?? xD But a cool idea is maybe to like, color ONLY the blood.. Then it'd be redish, black, and white. Just an idea.